Wow, Kim. Just lettin' it all hang out, huh? This is going to go swimmingly, I can already tell.
I'm really digging the color scheme on this page. Like other people have already mentioned, this portrays the feeling of a late-night meal under fluorescent lighting. I already saw the flat-colored version on Patreon and it already looked great, but adding shading and details in the background adds so much to your pages. I also like the way you add spot colors to your outlines. It gives a feeling of slight translucency. And the little detail of Sugar putting a chair out for Kim, and Kim's eyes get all watery, like "Wow I can't believe someone is actually being NICE to me!!!"
And ohhhhhh Kim........blurting out the results of your psych eval like it'll give you street cred. If you aren't cool in the eyes of Carmilla, how are you even alive right now?
also I've been following your work for a long time and I've been shy about commenting for some reason until now, hi
akakhdhdhsjdj that little blush of kims when sugar pushes in her chair.... fucking superb you funky little bi linsang
((AT LEAST IM PRETTY SURE SHES BI IIRC if im wrong feel free to correct me))
you're not wrong, kim is canonically bi. while it doesn't really play a huge role in the story, i think the way this is the most obvious is just how she treats sugar like a normal human being. straight girls tend to have a lot more malice or anxiety about them when interacting with other girls who are gender non-conforming.
OMG rip @ kim's ego ghost. the "uncool grave" panel and its preceding "the words CRITICAL HIT" panel have a very tactiley oil paint-y texture i love it
and also omg tabitha sinking into her chair in panel 10 is tfw and i love her
carmilla's just trying to have fun but everyone's in a "no fun allowed" mood fjhglfgh tho makes sense with the setting/recent events/for tabitha probably the anxiety+hungry
the salt detailing on tabitha's pretzel is super-yummy looking makes me want to dig in to some pretzels
Whittaker: >I
also Sugars <_< face on the sixth panel i love it... obligatory mention that i love Carmilla and also oh my GOD the "uncool" grave *Feels it*
carmilla calling kim uncool makes me think she at least has some idea of how young kim is but also omg carmilla don't coerce children into debating you.
i do also appreciate tabitha bluntly setting her own boundaries here.
whittaker panel 6 is my favorite on this page. theres so much going on she can't even pick what to get mad at. all the rude comments are just fighting inside her and it gets processed into [kermit squish face]
i just caught up on this story from the beginning and im really in love with it!!! you have such a talent for writing believable characters and the art.. omg. i love watching it evolve into how playful its become :]
its sooo nice to see such meaningful and well done storytelling that i can actually relate to.. i could gush about it all day lol.. but anyway thank you for putting this story together & i hope you have a nice night or evening or day or whatever :]
hhhh sometimes seeing kim act like. her actual age. (uncool................... a death sentence) and saying borderline disorder just makes everything she's going through hit harder because she's. still a child. she's so young and has to go through this
kim seems so young on this page... especially the last panel of her and how she says "borderline disorder" oml
I'm really digging the color scheme on this page. Like other people have already mentioned, this portrays the feeling of a late-night meal under fluorescent lighting. I already saw the flat-colored version on Patreon and it already looked great, but adding shading and details in the background adds so much to your pages. I also like the way you add spot colors to your outlines. It gives a feeling of slight translucency. And the little detail of Sugar putting a chair out for Kim, and Kim's eyes get all watery, like "Wow I can't believe someone is actually being NICE to me!!!"
And ohhhhhh Kim........blurting out the results of your psych eval like it'll give you street cred. If you aren't cool in the eyes of Carmilla, how are you even alive right now?
also I've been following your work for a long time and I've been shy about commenting for some reason until now, hi
((AT LEAST IM PRETTY SURE SHES BI IIRC if im wrong feel free to correct me))
and also omg tabitha sinking into her chair in panel 10 is tfw and i love her
carmilla's just trying to have fun but everyone's in a "no fun allowed" mood fjhglfgh tho makes sense with the setting/recent events/for tabitha probably the anxiety+hungry
the salt detailing on tabitha's pretzel is super-yummy looking makes me want to dig in to some pretzels
great job! on page!! <3
also Sugars <_< face on the sixth panel i love it... obligatory mention that i love Carmilla and also oh my GOD the "uncool" grave *Feels it*
i do also appreciate tabitha bluntly setting her own boundaries here.
its sooo nice to see such meaningful and well done storytelling that i can actually relate to.. i could gush about it all day lol.. but anyway thank you for putting this story together & i hope you have a nice night or evening or day or whatever :]